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 Prongles POP Display, with snacks            Critique from Michael J. Martinez
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 Donated by Cards Against Humanity            Donated by Michael J. Martinez
 One-time snack-makers Cards Against Humanity   Michael will critique up to 25,000 words of your
 sent us goodies from their 2017 Black Friday   SF/F novel (or a shorter work), including both an
 promotion: Original Prongles plus their retail   overall opinion on the strength of the work, thoughts
 display! Show off your snack food in style!  on individual sections, and ideas on direction and
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 Critique from Joshua Palmatier                Laura Anne Gilman will write flap copy

 Donated by Joshua Palmatier                   Donated by Laura Anne Gilman
 Joshua will write a general evaluation of your story   Laura says, “I am offering to write-from-scratch or
 and mark up the manuscript using comments and   revise existing copy (limit 300 words) for an indie
 track changes in the document itself, although this   publication (novel or collection, any genre).”

 will NOT be a formal line or copy edit, simply   She has 20 years’ experience writing compelling
 commentary at specific points in the short story.  summaries for book covers—trust the professional!
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 Critique from Pamela Freeman                 SF worldbuilding help from Eric Dahl

 Donated by Pamela Freeman                    Donated by Prof. Eric Dahl
 Pamela will read and critique either up to 50 000   This auction gets you one physics professor’s
 words of any kind of novel you like (or less of a   critique of your world building—what laws are
 shorter work). This can include a structural outline;   broken, what is or is not consistent, and what crazy

 in which case she will assess the overall storyline as   inventions your ever-attentive readers might create
 well.                                        for your universe....
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