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Prongles POP Display, with snacks Critique from Michael J. Martinez
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Donated by Cards Against Humanity Donated by Michael J. Martinez
One-time snack-makers Cards Against Humanity Michael will critique up to 25,000 words of your
sent us goodies from their 2017 Black Friday SF/F novel (or a shorter work), including both an
promotion: Original Prongles plus their retail overall opinion on the strength of the work, thoughts
display! Show off your snack food in style! on individual sections, and ideas on direction and
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Critique from Joshua Palmatier Laura Anne Gilman will write flap copy
Donated by Joshua Palmatier Donated by Laura Anne Gilman
Joshua will write a general evaluation of your story Laura says, “I am offering to write-from-scratch or
and mark up the manuscript using comments and revise existing copy (limit 300 words) for an indie
track changes in the document itself, although this publication (novel or collection, any genre).”
will NOT be a formal line or copy edit, simply She has 20 years’ experience writing compelling
commentary at specific points in the short story. summaries for book covers—trust the professional!
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Critique from Pamela Freeman SF worldbuilding help from Eric Dahl
Donated by Pamela Freeman Donated by Prof. Eric Dahl
Pamela will read and critique either up to 50 000 This auction gets you one physics professor’s
words of any kind of novel you like (or less of a critique of your world building—what laws are
shorter work). This can include a structural outline; broken, what is or is not consistent, and what crazy
in which case she will assess the overall storyline as inventions your ever-attentive readers might create
well. for your universe....
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