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 Bed Song Book by Neil Gaiman  Click for everything!  Critique from Bradley P. Beaulieu
                                                                                                           Click for everything!

 Donated by awesome supporter Neta!           Donated by Bradley P. Beaulieu
 Quantity: 1                                  Brad will read up to 12,500 words of your
 Signed:  Yes—Neil, Amanda Palmer, Kyle Cassidy  manuscript and draft a formal review covering
 Kickstarter-exclusive specifically designed to be   how well the story opens, along with notes on
 “the most mind-boggling book anybody could ever   characterization, dialogue, tone, pacing, tension,

 own.” Thank you, Neta, for the generous donation!  and all the positives and negatives he might come up
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 Angel: Immortality for Dummies                Critique from Sherwood Smith


 Donated by IDW                                Donated by Sherwood Smith
 Quantity: 1                                   Author and professional writers’ workshop director
 Written by Fables scribe Bill Willingham. When   Sherwood Smith will read up to 150,000 words

 Angel goes missing, Connor steps in, and learns   of your fantasy story, and will put her years of
 pretty quickly that being a hero is a lot harder than   professional experience to work analyzing and
 dad makes it look.                            giving constructive feedback on how you can make
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 Transformers: Autocracy                      Brainstorm with Sebastien de Castell


 Donated by Grim Oak Press                    Donated by Sebastien de Castell
 Quantity: 165                                The author of the award-winning series The
 Before Optimus became a Prime, he fought for   Greatcoats will spend an hour on the phone

 order. Before Megatron became a conqueror, he   with you discussing plot, pacing, or whatever
 fought for freedom. Before they were enemies, they   boondoggles seem to be plaguing your writing, in
 stood against – Autocracy.                   order to make sure you have smooth sailing for the
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 See everything from IDW Publishing                                 See all the available Critiques


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