Up to 10,000 words critiqued by Brooke Johnson

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Brooke Johnson


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I will read the first chapters of your manuscript (up to 10,000 words total), provide feedback on the strength of your opening, characters, and setting, and offer suggestions for improvement. This is not a line-edit, but I will flag typos, confusing sentences, and other issues as I read. My strong suits are fantasy and historical fiction (any age), but I also occasionally read contemporary, romance, and science fiction. No erotica or sexual violence, please.

Brooke is a stay-at-home mom, amateur seamstress, RPG enthusiast, and art hobbyist in addition to all that book writing. As the jack-of-all-trades bard of the family, she adventures through life with her fiercely-bearded paladin of a husband, their warrior-princess daughter, a cowardly wizard of a dog, and a roguish cat that somehow persuaded them to let him join the party.

They currently reside in Northwest Arkansas, but once they earn enough loot and experience, they’ll build a proper castle somewhere and defend against all manner of dragons, goblins, and whatever else dares take them on.