Brooke Johnson (Chroniker City) will critique your short story!
Note: All proceeds from our auctions are donated to Heifer International
Brooke Johnson will read/critique up to 10,000 words of your short story!
I will read your short story (up to 10,000 words), provide feedback on the overall story, pacing, plot, characters, and setting, and offer suggestions for improvement. This is not a line-edit, but I will flag typos, confusing sentences, and other issues as I read. My strong suits are fantasy and historical fiction (any age), but I also occasionally read contemporary, romance, science fiction, and creepy horror. No erotica or sexual violence, please.
Brooke is a stay-at-home mom, amateur seamstress, RPG enthusiast, and art hobbyist in addition to all that book writing. As the jack-of-all-trades bard of the family, she adventures through life with her fiercely-bearded paladin of a husband, their warrior-princess daughter, a cowardly wizard of a dog, and a roguish cat that somehow persuaded them to let him join the party.
They currently reside in Northwest Arkansas, but once they earn enough loot and experience, they’ll build a proper castle somewhere and defend against all manner of dragons, goblins, and whatever else dares take them on.
At the end of the auction, we will get everyone in touch with each other via email.