AUCTION – Editor John Adamus will critique your manuscript AND consult with you via Skype!


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John Adamus

Editor John Adamus will critique your first few chapters and consult with you via Skype!


John Adamus is offering a full developmental critique and a 1-hour consultation on either the first 25 pages or first 3 chapters (whichever comes first).

This includes:

  •  a developmental edit of the pages, done in MS-Word, including comments and in-line edits
  •  a breakdown report of Characters, Plot, and Worldbuilding for the submission (this is usually 3-10 pages of analysis and suggestions with an eye towards publication and readership)
  •  a 1-hour consultation to address the edit as well as answer any writing, editing, or publication questions you may have (Consultation held via phone, Skype, or Zoom)

John Adamus is a creative coach and developmental editor with 20+ years of experience helping writers start, improve, and finish their manuscripts – taking their work from something in their heads to something complete and publishable. He has worked with over 160 authors across numerous genres, in both series and standalone books, and is passionate and dedicated to helping everyone tell their stories to the best of their abilities. He is one of the founding partners of Parvus Press, and was the editor for several of their series. He and his work are available at his website and he’s constantly on Twitter @awesome_john.

At the end of the auction, we’ll contact the auction winner to arrange this service.

Worldbuilders is very grateful to John Adamus for this donation.



Proceeds from this auction will be donated to Heifer International to support their humanitarian efforts worldwide.
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