AUCTION – April White will critique up to 5,000 words OR hop on Skype to discuss your book!


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April White

Your choice: Critique or consultation with author April White!


Are you already writing your novel or short story, or are you kicking around an idea that still needs fleshing out into a complex plot?

April White is an award-winning author of fantasy, time travel, historical mystery, and romance, and she is offering the winner of this Worldbuilders auction THEIR CHOICE of either a Read-and-Critique of up to 5,000 of your words, OR a Skype Story Consultation, during which you can pitch your story and bounce ideas/plots/characters off each other (be warned, April has opinions and isn’t afraid to wield them). 

So, for constructive criticism and useful notes, or for an author’s story and character-plotting thoughts focused on your ideas, consider donating to Worldbuilders through this auction.

APRIL WHITE has been a film producer, private investigator, bouncer, teacher and screenwriter. She has climbed in the Himalayas, survived a shipwreck, and lived on a gold mine in the Yukon. She and her husband share their home in Southern California with two extraordinary boys and a lifetime collection of books.

Her first novel, Marking Time is the 2016 winner of the Library Journal Indie E-Book Award for YA Literature, and all five books in the Immortal Descendants series are on the Amazon Top 100 lists in Time Travel and Historical Fantasy. More information and her blog can be found at

At the end of the auction, we will contact the winner to arrange this service.

Worldbuilders is very grateful to April White for this donation.



Proceeds from this auction will be donated to Heifer International to support their humanitarian efforts worldwide.
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